Continuing to follow the river on this track.
Today's session was a mixed bag, but I think that I'm gradually getting somewhere with this music. The big challenge is to resist the obvious, and to instead take it somewhere unexpected.
At this point, it feels like the right time to do something even more different (differenter?), by bringing in a harmonic change. Different chords, maybe even a slightly different rhythmic feel, in order to break up the repetitions.
Question: Does this music sound liquid enough?
As always, I'd love to hear your thoughts and ideas. Throw me something from out of left field!
good intro
1:18good uptake
1:50 nice uptake
230 I do not like the sound of the bass beat, it sounds too much like a bicycle horn
3:10 like the piano
4:10 loving all the parts
5:00 this really works well
I'll be honest...the sounds today are a bit unsettling. My wife got a bit nervous (maybe it was me). The sounds and rhythms certainly wake you up rather than relax...and if that is the intent, bravo! I'll listen a few more times and my thoughts on the segment may evolve, but wanted to record my fresh first impressions.